A Dark Shock v2

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A Dark Shock

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Hey ho my amigos.

I wrote a short story. It's worth 6.25 pages.
I hope you could take the time to read it, because I spent majority of today writing it.

Please note a few things:

• This is a Fantasy story.
• This was just finished an hour ago.
• This hasn't gone through much editing.
• The story's plot points might still be hazy.
• There's a possibility you'll find this anti-climactic.

Alrighty, here goes nothin'!